In this lovely day, I wanna share the story about my process when I tried to find a job. On the began of February 2011, I tried to make my first curriculum vitae for a number of companies in Jakarta. Fortunately, they ask me to get an interview for the position that I need. That’s the first time, I got an interview and I was really excited. But so pitty I’m, They can’t receive me to have that position. The second time, one of the food and beverages company in Bekasi gave me a chance to get an interview again. They told me that I can start to work from Monday up to Sunday in full time, but the problem is I’m still a student, so I just can work as a part timer. I almost gave up at that time. Unpredictable, when I thought that I had enough, I got a called from one of the companies in Jatiwaringin to have a training for 4 days in their restaurant and I started my first job in there. First day was my last day to work in there because it’s so hard for me. Then, I decided to resign from there, for some reason. Finally, on 7 of April 2011, Allah showed the way for me, I started my second job as a tutor in one of the course where doesn’t far from my house. I believe that Allah still with me, so I’m really appreciate for everything which he gives to me.Not only everything that I want, but he really knows everything that I need .So, for you who still seeking a job if the mind keep thinking you had enough, but the heart keep telling you don’t give up. Keep moving on and through it all just stand up!.

When 1 door closed, another door opened:-.It's really interesting paragraph as u clearly explain each supporting sentence well. In other words, it's well-developed paragraph. But well, I dunno what happened to u, Rani, er, I identify a series of mistakes in this writing. It's dealing with the grammar and appropriate use of parts of speech. Let's take a look at these mistakes:
BalasHapus-"On the began of February 2011", why don't u write "in the beginning"?
-"Unpredictable", should be "unpredictably"
-"Allah still with me", u miss to be here
-"I’m really appreciate", u hev to omit to be
O ya, when the pronoun 'he' refers to Almighty Allah, u hev to capitalize it (He).
Well Rani, no matter what u experience with, I still hope to monitor ur consistency in producing g'd writing:-)