Hi, I'm Maharani. In this opportunity, I wanna tell you about my closest friend and our relationship stories. Her name is Devi Nurvebriyanti. She was born on February 26, 1991 in Jakarta. I think she is one of the cute girls in my class. We have the same hobies, but we have different character. We always spend almost all of the time in campus together, share our problems, and she is my problem solver. Devi has two sister. Her older sister has got married and her younger sister is a student in junior high school. Devi is so close with my family and I'm also close too with her family especially her mom. Sad, happy, confused, and missunderstanding are our food everyday, but it doesn't make our friendship break down. Keep this friendship alive, ladies !.
Well Rani, I commented ur writing 2 days ago. When I recheck it, no comment posts in ur blog:-(((
BalasHapusIt's really nice, well-developed, and systematic paragraph. Though u do not state which one ur TS and concluding sentence in a very brief way, I noe what's ur writing is about (state 'em clearly next time, ok). You give the readers clear description on the person u a describing. Why don't u put the pict to make ur writing more clear? Good job, excellent!